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1. I conveyed the image that obesity is a major problem in America today.
2. My main points seemed clear.
3. My power point served as a good sensory aid and showed the most important facts from my speech.
4. I did not have enough eye contact and was not loud or enthusiastic.
5. The most effective part of my presentation was my organized, detailed style and facts.
6. The least effective aspect of my presentation was my lack of eye contact, enthusiasm and voice projection.
October 17 2005, 19:02:50 UTC 6 years ago
2.The PowerPoint was neat and relevant to the subject.
3.She used very little hand gesture. Not much of eye contact, and she didn't really show emotion delivering the speech.
4.The most effective part of her speech was the details and it was very didactic.
5.Some of the things she could improve on are her eye contact and speak with enthusiasm
October 18 2005, 15:29:25 UTC 6 years ago
Informative Speech comment
1) Main idea was that obesity is a problem.2) The information given is clear and easy to see where you got your information from as well.
3) There was a little reading and spoke sort of monotone.
4) The most effective parts of your presentation was a good powerpoint and good organization.
5) 1) Try not to read as much. 2) Speak more enthusiastically or vary your voice. 3) Work on eye contact.
October 21 2005, 03:45:53 UTC 6 years ago
peer review-informative
1. the main point was that obesity is a growing problem among people in america2. the information was very well layed out throughout the speech and the powerpoint was easy to follow.
3. still a little monotone but better than last time. not bad.
4. the most effective part was the use of a clear wellorganized powerpoint
5. just memorize more, more eye contact, and less monotone.